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Why Can't You See? by ~Sophie118:iconSophie118:

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©2008-2009 ~Sophie118
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Inspired by Summers-solstice's work, "Nothing's Wrong" [link]
Please have a look at her work first.

I have written from the other persons point of view and how they are questioning everything and reading between the lines. (Possibly a little too much.)

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~Summers-Solstice Jul 13, 2008, 12:22:53 PM
Wow, this is really cool. I love how different you made it look just by using a different font and colours.

Thanks for the link. (;

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I'm happy just because I found out I'm really no one.
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~queroro Jul 18, 2008, 10:23:01 PM
urm.. it's too colorful for the message. just my op.

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the proper order of things is always a mystery to me. you, too?
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~Sophie118 Jul 18, 2008, 10:31:24 PM
Thanks, it's great to hear different opinions.
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~dream-dancer Jul 24, 2008, 7:21:17 AM
i totally get what this is sayin and i feel the same way and that goes with nothing's wrong too
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~Kitsune90 Jul 26, 2008, 8:45:22 AM
Are you, like "Nothing's Wrong", going to share what the layers say? Or are you going to leave people guessing?

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"In the drama of life, I'm the comic relief"
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~Sophie118 Jul 26, 2008, 2:36:53 PM
Alright seeing as you asked I'll put the layers up, but unlike "Nothing's Wrong" mine is not a story; it is just many questions put together. (:

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I can't take your pain away,
I really wish I could, though.

I'll always be there for you.
Too much hurt, too much pain.
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~DerisiveEchoes Aug 9, 2008, 10:04:27 PM
I really like this piece. It really initiates a dialogue on motivation and interpersonal communication. I think that sometimes good intentions, no matter how noble, can blur into incoherent, useless noise. I don't know if that was what you were going for on this, but you did illustrate it beautifully. Also I think each sentence on there is sort of symbolic of the love the narrator has for the person they are directed toward, and that sort of adds another layer to it.
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~Sophie118 Aug 9, 2008, 10:46:55 PM
Thanks, you've been able to describe my intentions perfectly. It's a fairly truthful piece as I am actually the person always questioning, many people say I care far too much, which is why there is the element of love (and possibly excessive caring) through each question.

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I can't take your pain away,
I really wish I could, though.

I'll always be there for you.
Too much hurt, too much pain.
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~SpazticCat Aug 15, 2008, 5:27:09 PM
Oh, I like this one too!
It constrasts "Nothing's Wrong" nicely with all the color...

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the rofloflopagus is in the roflcopter stalking you
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